Suggestions
From Persomem to POMegranate Jun 28, 2009 7:59 pm
I'm in a "writey" mood, and, as we've put some work into the development of PoM, I'd like to know if I should try a "chapter 1 trial" again. Or, perhaps, write from another point in the story?
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From POMegranate to Persomem Jun 28, 2009 8:00 pm
Well, [SPOILERS], maybe. Let's start there and hopefully progress to [SPOILERS].
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From Persomem to POMegranate Jun 28, 2009 8:04 pm
Hm, how should I start, specifically?
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From POMegranate to Persomem Jun 28, 2009 8:06 pm
Just about how he's [SPOILERS].
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From Persomem to POMegranate Jun 28, 2009 8:08 pm
Wait, I'm confused now.
This is from chapter one, right?
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From POMegranate to Persomem Jun 28, 2009 8:09 pm
Well, if [SPOILERS] in chapter one, yes.
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From Persomem to POMegranate Jun 28, 2009 8:10 pm
Of... book one?
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From POMegranate to Persomem Jun 28, 2009 8:10 pm
Yeah, when he gets [SPOILERS].
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From Persomem to POMegranate Jun 28, 2009 8:12 pm
Well... um, are we going to flashback to his arrival and all that?
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From POMegranate to Persomem Jun 28, 2009 8:13 pm
Rem's arrival? Oh, like at the train, right? It starts with the train.
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From Persomem to POMegranate Jun 28, 2009 8:15 pm
Hm, I think I like the idea of starting with the [SPOILERS], though. Sets in at an interesting point, pulls readers in. It would just be hard to find a good way to show the arrival.
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From POMegranate to Persomem Jun 28, 2009 8:16 pm
If you don't set up the characters, it's nigh unto impossible to care about them.
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From Persomem to POMegranate Jun 28, 2009 8:19 pm
...Yeah, true.
So, train then? I need to make it more interesting character/world, and less clunky exposition.
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