Thursday, August 21, 2014

Redbox w/ Commentary, Deleted Scenes




   Not much to be commented upon that I've told you why these scenes have been deleted. But you can see me there, abandon the idea of him having the apartment to himself and introducing Okimba through his grades, right as I'm introducing Okimba through his grades instead of living in the apartment. Just leave that entire last half of that third page blank, because I knew I'd never use it. Except as these deleted scenes, which I'm doing now! there's not much else to be said.

   I guess it's a good thing, that these are deleted, because of that. These pages were just uninspired. I'm glad I realized that in time.

No comments:

Post a Comment