And there's the "...do that."
Trying to use the watch as a source of illumination in that last panel here just falls flat. Especially considering how the watch is half-hidden, and may have just been drawn in afterwards o provide an excuse to color in the panel. Maybe a lighted dashboard? But if there's one page that illustrates how bad I am at drawing vehicles, this is it. There's no room for a dashboard in there. Her seat is suddenly claustrophobically close to the steering wheel from the last panel (and her seat belt makes the seat look like a backpack.) Or maybe she was that close to the steering wheel all along and the first panel is just in some weird fishbowl lens? That's what it looks like.
I did not say, "...one last time," after "taking her out for a joyride," because that ruins the (I think) twist that the entire thing is because the world is ending.
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